My free writing
Once upon a time there was a mystery box out side of a haunted house and It had blood in side the house it was leaking down the windows and When ever you look at the house the doll well turn it´s head towards you but suddenly the door opens and the box dissapear´s in side the house there was a scream that came from the house then this little girl went into the house and She screamed and 10 years later she never came out of the house then the box´s moved and The girl was in side the box´s and That was the end of her life the end.
Well done Maria. Make sure you don't write in capitals next time, I want to see where you put your capital letters.
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